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Wednesday, September 21, 2011

WALT: write a good beginning, middle and end

Once upon a time there was a dragon, a very scary dragon. But the dragon was scared of mice. One day there was a mouse walking past and the dragon was scared of mice. The dragon said hello to the mouse and the mouse said hello back to him. The dragon was friends with the mouse and the mouse and the dragon went to the playground and they lived happily ever after. The End
By Meihana.

3 comments:

  1. I like how you used once upon a time and the end. I know you can write a good middle because you made a problem for the dragon. Well done Meihana, you did this really well all by yourself!

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  2. cool story Meihana

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  3. Wow cool story Meihana it is very iterresting. I
    would like to here a nather story like that.

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