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Wednesday, September 28, 2011

WALT: write how a character feels

The pirates crept up to the fence and then crept to the back of the house. But a Robot Security Mouse saw them coming and squeaked "Intruder Alert" Granny was worried. Milo rushed over to see robber but it was a pirate. Milo was extremely freaked out. He ran to his granny and said all about the pirates. Granny rushed inside and came out with her old army clothes and her gun and guarded the treasure and Milo guarded it too. Milo got a mouse trap and put it by the treasure. The pirates went to get the treasure and stepped in the mouse trap "Yowww!" The pirate ran away and Milo and granny lived happily ever after.
By Jacob

1 comment:

  1. What an awesome story Jacob! I'd like to have a Robot Security Mouse at my house.

    Hi to all you wonderful All Stars also! I'm so looking forward to seeing you all on Monday night!
    Rachel :)

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