Well done Jacob. This is a huge improvement on making your writing tidy. I also like how you used the words "outside into the darkness". Great Job!
This is a great story Zac. I like how you have used tidy writing and made sure you have capital letters. Ka pai to mahi!
Grace, I like how you have made sure you were a careful writer with full stops, capital letters and basic words. Well done on a lovely tidy story!
Great stories about your weekend Jacob, Zac and Grace.
ReplyDeleteCherrie (Milania's mum)