WALT: write neatly.
It is important that we include the 5w's to make our writing interesting but we have to be able to raed our writing as well.
Here is Zara's writing. She used the 5w's well. She has good tidy writing as well.
We are the... Room 13 Digital Dudes, Russell Street School, Palmerston North, New Zealand.
That looks cool Zara because your writing is neat! Next time you could inprove your capatal letters and full stops.
ReplyDeletewell done Zara you did a great job on your writing you could Inprove to make your writing look nicer becuse your writing looks srcafy and it is all moshed up togther
ReplyDeleteWow done Zara you did a great job you inprove nothing.
ReplyDeleteZara I like your neat writing. Next time I could inprove my Writing because then my writing could go on the blog.
ReplyDeleteNeat writing zara!Was the beautification day awesome.I was camping so I could not come.You carn't get better than your writing.You could do a brain bubble because you could put your ideas in.
ReplyDeleteWow zara you are geting betar at your writing you code pradis to prakdis on your finga spasis.
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