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Sunday, June 24, 2012

Poem of the Week

Illustrated by Rilee.

5 comments:

  1. Wow rilee I like the way you did your kitchen sink. You can improve nothing. I really like way you wrote the words on the pictures.

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  2. good job Rilee. I like your sun why you put a s, on the middle of your sun.

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  3. wow rilee you do explain the water cycle really well wonder if you did another one could improve

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  4. I like your back ground rilee you could improve the titil because the green dasent match with the blue.

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  5. I like your poem rille because it is buetafull and because it has the names on it did you no on the water cycle poem I forgot to draw the brook

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