Tuesday, August 28, 2012
Monday, August 27, 2012
Ferg Shares about Fencing
Today Ferg shared his presentation about fencing. It was really interesting and Ferg did a great job.
Things we liked about his presentation:
I liked the different colour on the title and how big it is. The olympic rings are cool
The layout is good because the pictures are spread out and easy to look at looked at the audience
the writing is interesting because it is straight and slanted
how you got information of the internet
he had good information and knows about his topic
What can he improve on next time:
speak a bit louder
look at the audience a bit more at the start
bigger, tidy writing might make it easier to read
Things we liked about his presentation:
I liked the different colour on the title and how big it is. The olympic rings are cool
The layout is good because the pictures are spread out and easy to look at looked at the audience
the writing is interesting because it is straight and slanted
how you got information of the internet
he had good information and knows about his topic
What can he improve on next time:
speak a bit louder
look at the audience a bit more at the start
bigger, tidy writing might make it easier to read
WALT: Write to persuade
Purpose: To convince other people to change their mind.
Success Criteria:
Good Beginning
Success Criteria:
Good Beginning
- Title
- tell us about the topic
- Good points/ reasons
- back up what you say/ prove your point
- add detail/ use because/stretch out your idea
- link to why it is important to you
- use topic words
- summerise
- question
- pleading
Why we should have a pyjama day on Wednesday.
Dear Ebony
We
should really really have a party because it will be really interesting
and it will be fun playing with our teddies at school. It will be a
fantastic day if we have it on Wednesday. It will be cool to wear our
pyjamas and every one will be "wow look at those kids". We were a bit
naughty at C.R.E. but we will start being good right now. Please,
please, please, can we have are pyjamas day please.
From Jayde
Can we please have a pyjama party because I already know which teddy I'm bringing on Wednesday. We should have pyjama day on Wednesday because I think we have tried a lot last week and I promise we will be the best we can be and do the best we can do. Do you think we need it? I do. I think that way because we do lots of learning and I think it's worth it because on the mat I'm really quiet. And I'm going to try to listen to every little thing to do something special like pyjama day.
From Rilee
Saturday, August 25, 2012
Measurement
On Friday we explored measurement of weight.
Write a comment about what you found you.
Write a comment about what you found you.
Reading this Week (Blue and Orange Group)
http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/template-styles/item/1906-first-man-on-the-moon-dies/1906-first-man-on-the-moon-dies
Read this news article from Kiwi Kids News. Write a comment on how the work that the two astronauts did that day were so important to 'mankind'.
Read this news article from Kiwi Kids News. Write a comment on how the work that the two astronauts did that day were so important to 'mankind'.
Thursday, August 23, 2012
Monday, August 20, 2012
Determination
We had a try last week on our own to make a pinwheel in five minutes. We all found it really hard and had to leave it unfinished. Today we worked together as a class and had the afternoon to make it.
We all showed determination to keep going when it was tricky, find some clues that could help you or ask someone for help. We all felt very proud when our pinwheels spun around in the wind.
Can you make one? Click on the link below and try one for yourself!
http://www.enchantedlearning.com/crafts/pinwheel/
Thursday, August 16, 2012
Wednesday, August 15, 2012
What is determination?
Monday, August 13, 2012
Jeffery Shares about
Things we liked about his presentation:
the olympic rings are cool
the gold medal is interesting
loud voice
introduced your poster at the start and finished it of at the end
looked at the audience
Things he can improve next time:
clear voice
draw some pictures yourself
start my poster earlier so I can get it done in time
darker colour for the writing
the olympic rings are cool
the gold medal is interesting
loud voice
introduced your poster at the start and finished it of at the end
looked at the audience
Things he can improve next time:
clear voice
draw some pictures yourself
start my poster earlier so I can get it done in time
darker colour for the writing
Logan shares about Running at the Olympics
Things we liked about his presentation:
drew some of the pictures
used a flag for the background
pictures were from the internet, newspaper and you drew some
you made a number tag like the runners wear
clear voice, looked at the audience
Things he could work on next time:
filled up some of the space in the corner of your poster
drew some of the pictures
used a flag for the background
pictures were from the internet, newspaper and you drew some
you made a number tag like the runners wear
clear voice, looked at the audience
Things he could work on next time:
filled up some of the space in the corner of your poster
Jayde shares about pole vault
Things we like about her presentation:
heaps of colour
drawn pictures of a person doing pole vault and the audience
good information on the back so you could read it while we looked at the pictures
Things that she can improve next time:
look at the audience more instead of your poster
read the words a bit slower
talk a bit clearer
heaps of colour
drawn pictures of a person doing pole vault and the audience
good information on the back so you could read it while we looked at the pictures
Things that she can improve next time:
look at the audience more instead of your poster
read the words a bit slower
talk a bit clearer
Kai Shares about Boxing
Things we liked about his presentation:
easy to read font with a good background colour
animations were cool
lots of information
knew about the sport and could answer questions
Things he can improve next time:
look at the audience more
talk a bit louder
easy to read font with a good background colour
animations were cool
lots of information
knew about the sport and could answer questions
Things he can improve next time:
look at the audience more
talk a bit louder
Sophie Shares about BMX Racing
Things we liked about her presentation:
good clear voice
good layout of your poster
cool photos
Things to improve:
larger text on the poster
good clear voice
good layout of your poster
cool photos
Things to improve:
larger text on the poster
Rilee shares about hockey
Things we liked about her presentation:
interesting colours
lots of information
hand drawn pictures
Things she can work on next time:
louder voice
Atlanta shares about archery
Things we liked about her presentation:
Read out all her information
had a picture of herself doing archery
lots of cool pictures
Things she can improve next time:
face the audience
speak louder
Thursday, August 9, 2012
Kylie shares about table tennis
Things we liked about her presentation:
put pictures up
did coloured pitcures
said heaps of information about table tennis
colourful text
What can she improve for next time:
louder voice
clear voice
speak a bit louder
know a bit more about table tennis so you can answer questions
look at the audience more
you could drawn a picture
put pictures up
did coloured pitcures
said heaps of information about table tennis
colourful text
What can she improve for next time:
louder voice
clear voice
speak a bit louder
know a bit more about table tennis so you can answer questions
look at the audience more
you could drawn a picture
Rileigh-Kaye shares about Hockey
Things we liked about her presentation:
decorations and make bits for your poster.
the olympic rings look cool
the winners table to see what each player has won
the uniform is really cool.
It makes your poster stand out.
the background is black and white like the uniform
spoke really clearly
Things she can improve next time:
maybe a bit smaller poster so there are no spots with nothing
instead of all the information (17 pages you found) you could just put the basic rule on your poster.
decorations and make bits for your poster.
the olympic rings look cool
the winners table to see what each player has won
the uniform is really cool.
It makes your poster stand out.
the background is black and white like the uniform
spoke really clearly
Things she can improve next time:
maybe a bit smaller poster so there are no spots with nothing
instead of all the information (17 pages you found) you could just put the basic rule on your poster.
Cooper shares about basketball
Things we liked about his presentation:
Basketball as a big title
drew his own pictures
colourful, bright and interesting to look at
Things he can improve next time
Put a picture of what a court looks like
louder clearer voice so we can hear at the back
a bit neater writing
coloured in your picture
Basketball as a big title
drew his own pictures
colourful, bright and interesting to look at
Things he can improve next time
Put a picture of what a court looks like
louder clearer voice so we can hear at the back
a bit neater writing
coloured in your picture
Vincent shares about Shotput
Vincents presentation was a bit different. He had a jar of shotputs (chocolates) with his information like flags.
Things we liked about his presentation:
The flags
the mini shotputs
olympic rings on the jar
A very imaginative and creative idea to use a jar with flags
We get to eat chocolates!
Things he can improve on next time:
your writing on the flags
talk just a little bit louder
clear voice all the time
talk about what you know and not just
Things we liked about his presentation:
The flags
the mini shotputs
olympic rings on the jar
A very imaginative and creative idea to use a jar with flags
We get to eat chocolates!
Things he can improve on next time:
your writing on the flags
talk just a little bit louder
clear voice all the time
talk about what you know and not just
Thomas shares about badminton
Things we liked about his presentation:
Stars on the poster
border and spikes around the writing
labels and diagrams and picture he drew himself
layout of the poster was good
loud clear voice
olympic rings were cool
Things he can improve next time:
writing could be a little bit neater
looking at the audience more
Aria shares about gymnastics
Things we like about her presentation:
pictures of medals
decoration and colour on the poster
olympic rings
draw your own pictures
clear voice
Things she can improve next time:
a bit louder voice
look at the audience a bit
bigger writing for the information
George shares about Beach Volley Ball
Things we liked:
Loud clear voice
Pictures of you doing the different hits
You made a little court so we know what it looks like the 3d picture
Things he can improve next time:
close up photo of people playing
explain about the sport a bit more
Loud clear voice
Pictures of you doing the different hits
You made a little court so we know what it looks like the 3d picture
Things he can improve next time:
close up photo of people playing
explain about the sport a bit more
Wednesday, August 8, 2012
Zara shares about badminton
Things we liked about her presentation:
Clear voice
good size writing
background colours match the colour of the rings
information was really good
good pictures, not too many
fun transitions
talk to the audience about what you know and not just read from the computer
What could you improve next time:
Look at the audience more
Clear voice
good size writing
background colours match the colour of the rings
information was really good
good pictures, not too many
fun transitions
talk to the audience about what you know and not just read from the computer
What could you improve next time:
Look at the audience more
Monday, August 6, 2012
Zach shares about Skeet Shooting
Things we like about his presentation:
Loud clear voice
Pictures were in a good order
have lots of detailed pictures
face the audience and you knew what you were talking about
layout of your poster was good
good colour of the title (the '2012' is in the ring colours)
chose good pictures
title of the paragraphs are in red
lots of time editing
Things we think he could improve:
make your writing a bit bigger
draw some pictures myself
Loud clear voice
Pictures were in a good order
have lots of detailed pictures
face the audience and you knew what you were talking about
layout of your poster was good
good colour of the title (the '2012' is in the ring colours)
chose good pictures
title of the paragraphs are in red
lots of time editing
Things we think he could improve:
make your writing a bit bigger
draw some pictures myself
Sophie shares about Gymnastics
Things we liked about the presentation:
cool font
loud clear voice
title looks like its 3d
lots of colour in the background and in the writing. The frames for the photos are pretty cool
a picture that she drew was cool
Things she could improve for next time:
a little bit louder voice
print all the writing out from the computer
cool font
loud clear voice
title looks like its 3d
lots of colour in the background and in the writing. The frames for the photos are pretty cool
a picture that she drew was cool
Things she could improve for next time:
a little bit louder voice
print all the writing out from the computer
Abigail shares about gymnastics
Things we liked about her presentation:
The pictures on the back
Bubbles as borders around the word
Things she can improve next time:
Add more colour
Explain what the sport is and ad more information about the things you do.
The pictures on the back
Bubbles as borders around the word
Things she can improve next time:
Add more colour
Explain what the sport is and ad more information about the things you do.
Sunday, August 5, 2012
Calais presented Rowing to the class
Things we liked:
I liked the way your poster looked.
The background you used made it stand out.
It had good layout
Things she can improve next time:
Colour the rings.
I liked the way your poster looked.
The background you used made it stand out.
It had good layout
Things she can improve next time:
Colour the rings.
Tane talks about Swimming
Things we liked
Added lots of colour to your poster
Used a easy font to read
Loud clear voice
Good drawings Looked for information in lots of places including bits you already knew
Things he can improve
speak a little bit louder for people down the back
Use a different background colour so you can see your drawings better
make the writing a bit bigger.
talk to the audience and not the computer screen.
Added lots of colour to your poster
Used a easy font to read
Loud clear voice
Good drawings Looked for information in lots of places including bits you already knew
Things he can improve
speak a little bit louder for people down the back
Use a different background colour so you can see your drawings better
make the writing a bit bigger.
talk to the audience and not the computer screen.
Olympic sharing from Liam
Liam shared his knowledge about Weightlifting.
Things we liked about his presentation:
Nice, clear, loud voice
Good information about what equipment they need and what they wear
drew some pictures.
Things he can improve next time:
Colour the pictures
know all the words and what you are saying about it.
Things we liked about his presentation:
Nice, clear, loud voice
Good information about what equipment they need and what they wear
drew some pictures.
Things he can improve next time:
Colour the pictures
know all the words and what you are saying about it.
Thursday, August 2, 2012
Poem of the Week
This weeks poem is called the Olympics. It was created by some student in London for a poetry competition. It is done as an acrostic poem.
An acrostic poem is when you use the each letter of a word as the first letter of a sentence or word. Here it is...
Our challenge this week was to create our own acrostic poem about the olympics. Here are some examples...
An acrostic poem is when you use the each letter of a word as the first letter of a sentence or word. Here it is...
Illustrated by Ella
Our challenge this week was to create our own acrostic poem about the olympics. Here are some examples...
Created by Thomas
Created by Aria
Lachlan Shares his Olympic Sport
Today Lachlan shared his learning about Taekwondoe. Here is some reflections that he and the class had...
Things that we liked about his presentation:
he had a title on each page
he explained the rules
he gave really interesting information
Things that he can work on for next time:
slow down so people can understand what he is talking about
look at the audience when he speaks.
Things that we liked about his presentation:
he had a title on each page
he explained the rules
he gave really interesting information
Things that he can work on for next time:
slow down so people can understand what he is talking about
look at the audience when he speaks.
Charlotte shares about an Olympic Sport
Charlotte shared what she found out about Judo.
Things we liked about her presentation:
The picture she drew made it interesting
She told us what some of the words mean
Something she can improve for next time:
Using a louder voice
Things we liked about her presentation:
The picture she drew made it interesting
She told us what some of the words mean
Something she can improve for next time:
Using a louder voice
Turbos come to visit
Today we were lucky to have a couple of the Manawatu Turbos players visit to share a little bit about their sport. We asked them questions like how do you get to be a rugby player? Do you ever lose? and do you play any other sports?
We also got a poster and a form to sign up and become a Turbos Member. If we sign up we might be able to win a chance to have breakfast with the team. Go the Turbos!
We also got a poster and a form to sign up and become a Turbos Member. If we sign up we might be able to win a chance to have breakfast with the team. Go the Turbos!
Jett Shares about an Olympic Sport
Today we started our Olympic Sport share. Jett was happy to start us of. We all agreed that he did a great job at sharing the facts he knows about the Triathlon. Here it is with some of our reflections...
Things we liked about Jetts presentation:
Layout was really easy to see and read
He used good pictures to show the different sports
He used a loud clear voice
Something he can improve on next time:
He could draw some of his own pictures as well
Things we liked about Jetts presentation:
Layout was really easy to see and read
He used good pictures to show the different sports
He used a loud clear voice
Something he can improve on next time:
He could draw some of his own pictures as well
Wednesday, August 1, 2012
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