Things we liked about the presentation:
cool font
loud clear voice
title looks like its 3d
lots of colour in the background and in the writing. The frames for the photos are pretty cool
a picture that she drew was cool
Things she could improve for next time:
a little bit louder voice
print all the writing out from the computer
I think that Sophie B could speek with a loweder vouse.
ReplyDeleteI like your poster Sophie you could improve trying to not fill up to much paper with the pitchers. I like how you put a buder around the pitchers and how you put the layout of your font.
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