Clear voice
good size writing
background colours match the colour of the rings
information was really good
good pictures, not too many
fun transitions
talk to the audience about what you know and not just read from the computer
What could you improve next time:
Look at the audience more
Well done Zara, it looks as if you are enjoying this. Grandma and Poppa
ReplyDeleteZara mum and dad were so proud of your efforts with this, I would love you to come and work with me one day! Susie.
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