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Wow Thomas i like this because you have included lots of detail.
that was a cool poam thomas I like your coler you have use maby you could add a bit more dital
Well done Thomas.you put a lot of details in Your poem.you could included more culer in your poem because their is not a lot
Love your details Thomas because you have got a colorful rainbow! Next time you could add more color because there's not much color.
Wow Thomas i like this because you have included lots of detail.
ReplyDeletethat was a cool poam thomas I like your coler you have use maby you could add a bit more dital
ReplyDeleteWell done Thomas.you put a lot of details in Your poem.you could included more culer in your poem because their is not a lot
ReplyDeleteLove your details Thomas because you have got a colorful rainbow! Next time you could add more color because there's not much color.
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