WALT: write a simile

Today it was raining and Cross Country had to be canceled. We sat out in the rain instead and wrote stories describing how it felt.

I was sitting outside and watching the rain fall from the sky. The rain is like chocolate chips falling from the sky. When its hits the ground it breaks. The rain sounds like little mice creeping on the ground.
By Atlanta

 Ebony says: I like your simile Atlanta. I think it makes your story sound more interesting a I can imaging what the rain was like from your description. Well done.