Loud clear voice
Pictures were in a good order
have lots of detailed pictures
face the audience and you knew what you were talking about
layout of your poster was good
good colour of the title (the '2012' is in the ring colours)
chose good pictures
title of the paragraphs are in red
lots of time editing
Things we think he could improve:
make your writing a bit bigger
draw some pictures myself
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